Reflection 1

Within the first week, we learnt several key elements of song writing. The key element that we need to keep in mind is the prosody of our song(1), which is how our lyrics and melody work together I found watching famous artists explain their process very helpful, as I can now integrate some of their advice into what I do to write and produce songs. Finneas’ use of unique sounds resonated with me (2). We then broke off into groups and wrote songs using random lyrics made up by the entire cohort. My group was made up of people who had varying degrees of songwriting knowledge. With the lyrics we were given, we originally decided on using the theme of a shopping centre. We then decided to make everyone create a lyrics using one of the words given to us. However, I personally found this made a very incoherent song with a confused story, so I decided to write a different song with a different story, inspired by the fallout currently occurring between Russia and Ukraine.

Lyrics:

Tangerine

War

Egg Timer

Paper

Internet

Bleeding window

Casserole


Theme: Shopping centre

Walking through the isles

Nothing looks sublimer

Seeing all these funny things

Like mixers, pans and egg timers

I’ve got armfuls of bananas,

But all I want is tangerine

A half off egg timer is the reminder that everything has changed

Not even mums casserole can heal this broken heart

But her recipes burns through my brain as I walk the isles of quicky mart

My phone won’t connect to the internet, now I’m aimlessly wondering

Bleeding windows, Wish I bought a Mac instead

Tangerine scented Pino clean

Disinfectant for my hospital dream

Newspaper print

Sitting on the shelves

The worlds at war again

I’m running out of time as I race through these halls

My song

Em, Bm, Am, G

Newspaper print

Sitting on the shelves

Worlds at war again

Get me through this hell

Our grandfathers fought just to fix this mess

Is anyone gonna help?

Cause word spreads fast on internet

Putting stories out that no one forgets

But somehow no one ever seems to give a crap

Is anyone gonna help?

(1) Rotumah, Grayson. “Creative Process/Introduction.” Workshop presented at the course Song Writing and Performance 1A, Hartley Building, University of Adelaide, February 28, 2022

(2) Pitchfork, “FINNEAS Explains How He Builds Songs For Billie Eilish | Critical Breakthroughs | Pitchfork” Apr 23, 2020